Prune and be perfect

Would you?
Could you?
Like Doctor Suess
remove some words
to slow the tune?
Too many “ands”
and too many “a’s”
remove “over”
from the last line
and I will sing
your poem’s praise.

© Copyright D. Archer October 2011.

Thanks Scarlet

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